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Past's Rain (In Spirit We Are Free)

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Pasts Rain (In Spirit We Are Free)

We roam through this world
Weary pawed and bleary eyed
Pushing forever forward
Hiding sorrow felt inside

They move on as we move forward
Past the spirit realm
They stand one final time
And smile where they dwell

Then they disappear from all
But deepest memories
We cry as they fade away
In spirit they are free

We can't move our paws again
Not in this sorrow made of rain
For we know that once it clears
None remain the same

Because it's difficult on the day
To see beyond the sorrow
May looking back in memory
Help comfort us tomorrow
This piece...just wow I'm pretty sure that's the first time in a long while I've cried while making a poem... this one just hit me HARD...

This piece was inspired by :iconkovowolf: she's a great artist and a wonderful person go look at her gallery it's full of spirit.

The artwork that I used to inspire me was
"Sorrow in Rain" [link] and the song I used to help inspire me was the same one she used to help inspire her piece it's called "Ow" by Stephan Moccio you can find it here [link]

As a side note this would have been the first DA original poem I put up but it got caught up in limbo for a bit. Also the title is homage to her and the group she started that's really helped me step forward as a person and an artist.

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Do not copy or use this work without permission from me.
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squibblyquill's avatar
I've read this a couple times and I haven't been able to figure out my reaction to it. I like the last two stanzas for flow though.